tgreffen Posted November 25, 2008 Share Posted November 25, 2008 I'm not a big poet. Actually this is the first real poem I have ever wrote. I just wrote it when a lot of things were happening with my life and it helped me feel happier. I strongly urge anyway who feels sad or depressed to write out your thoughts. Pain I see the pain burn, Like an ever-growing flame. Your hope slips away, Yet there is no-one to blame. The knife and joint won't help you, Devil's control within. Fight the urge to lay down, To rip apart your skin. Drugs may infest your blood, But your emotions remain there. The blood on your shirt, Won't change your prayer. Wipe away the tears, I feel your hurt. There's more to life than death. It won't take much to revert. Gaze into the darkness, Discover what's inside. Realise that you can make a difference, No matter where you hide. Link to comment
Beoslasher Posted November 25, 2008 Share Posted November 25, 2008 I definitely like this poem, very nicely done, and very nice advice, I particularly like the last stanza Gaze into the darkness, Discover what's inside. Realise that you can make a difference, No matter where you hide. Plz write more =) Link to comment
tgreffen Posted November 25, 2008 Author Share Posted November 25, 2008 Thanks a lot for the compliments. Don't worry I plan to write more. And you guys will be the first to read them. Link to comment
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