civilservant Posted July 19, 2008 Share Posted July 19, 2008 First off before I start this, I know people are going to say consider what you want out of this, but the honest answer is nothing, because it's not going to include a name or anything (although she'll know it's come from me) and she has no way of contacting me anymore because I've changed my number and she never knew where I lived anyway. So the following is going in the post to the ex today, simply as a way of closing things for more and saying what I need to say. As I say I don't expect a response, don't need a response, and won't get one. All I want to ask is people opinions on the following poem, if it gets the message accross and reads ok. I have posted the original, without the previous text, in poetry already but it seems people visit this section far more frequently and are more ready to offer opinions. So here goes: Because of you, The joy of life is renewed, Because of you, My faith in the human race was proved, Because of you, I see the better side of me, Beause of you, A better person is going to be, Thank you for being who you are, Thank you for being such a star, Because of you, I sought the help I needed, Because of you, That advice I heeded, Because of you, Every day is a dawn, Because of you, A better way is born, Thank you so much for all these things, Thank you for the joy it brings, These words I've wrote I've started many times, Perhaps this atones for some of my crimes, I wish I could say some words to heal, But because of you, I can't make that deal, So all I can say now to come to a end. Is goodbye, god bless, and post this to send, I want you to know that all this is true, And thank you so much for being you. So there we have it. Opinions anyone? Thanks in advance. Link to comment
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