to die

[darkplace]

I wish, i wish

I cry, i cry

i live only to die

 

never will i know happyness again

the love of another

i cherish the thoughts and time past

take me back, take me back

 

alone now i see nothing

i hear only my heart

it dies with every beat

weaker i become

 

i welcome pain, death, the night

it closes in, slowly i breath my last

the pills numb the pain

eternal sadness and remorse

forever

 

I wish, i wish

I cry, i cry

i live only to die

[Jeen]

It is really really good, I like the way you wrote the emotion into it, puling back and forth between love and pain.

 

It is lovely.

 

Thanks.