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mermayd

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heart pounding

wild thunder

Thoughts race

against the speed of sound

where am I going?

My body stands

without a motion

yet I have traveled somewhere else

I am not liked here

Nor is it to my own content

Where is that place that I used to hide?

the one that I fear to return to

to the naked eye

I am relaxed

entranced in my own thoughts

yet the truth stands

chaos frantically

whips and scrambles

through my veins

gushing and spurting

from a scarred source

that has begun to tear

again.

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heart pounding

wild thunder

Thoughts race

against the speed of sound

where am I going?

My body stands

without a motion

yet I have traveled somewhere else

I am not liked here

Nor is it to my own content

Where is that place that I used to hide?

the one that I fear to return to

to the naked eye

I am relaxed

entranced in my own thoughts

yet the truth stands

chaos frantically

whips and scrambles

through my veins

gushing and spurting

from a scarred source

that has begun to tear

again.

 

i like it. it has an undercurrent of rebirth and renewal, also of facing the demons in the past. u seem to be at grips with stuff well. i like it

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