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depthless sky (poem)


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i stare into the depths of the night sky

it's like a reflection of my soul

the falling raindrops are the tears i cry

and the blackness is the pain i've come to know

 

the stars you can see on a cloudless night

are those who make me shine

when clouds come and they disappear

it's when i'm forsaken and left behind

 

 

please tell me what you think of this poem everyone, good or bad.

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I write poetry at times too but i have to be in thwe right mood so i might not write for ages.

 

Thats a great poem, really great. Its a good way to express emotions. I would put it in a competition if you feel able? get proffessional feedback? x

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thanks everyone. im a generally happy person. but i have my moments. i write more when im down then anything, so most people who read my writing are just getting the more depressed side of me, so dont worry lol. any more comments happily accepted.

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