musicguy Posted January 13, 2008 Share Posted January 13, 2008 My heart is crumbling my soul is dying. darkness all around me even when the sun shines. I can't help but feel this way. when I feel it everyday. So alone, so empty. I'm losing control of what I used to feel when I was a young boy. the smiles, the laughter, the sheer happiness. has now faded away. I wish it was different. I wish I felt the way I did back then. It's so hard to change the way I feel now. Link to comment
Jeen Posted January 14, 2008 Share Posted January 14, 2008 Thanks. musicguy When I read the words and I look at the photo of me and friends on my dressing table. I get a lump in my throat and a tear in my eye for the words you have written are so true. I don't see any of them any more and when I look in the mirror I see how old I have become, and out of the conner of my eye I can see there is only my clothes and stuff in this room. ( Only my perfume in the air ) Your poetry is so close to my hart and feelings. I do love your poems. Jeen Link to comment
musicguy Posted January 15, 2008 Author Share Posted January 15, 2008 awww! Thank you. I just write from the heart Link to comment
alcide Posted January 15, 2008 Share Posted January 15, 2008 My heart is crumbling my soul is dying. darkness all around me even when the sun shines. I can't help but feel this way. when I feel it everyday. So alone, so empty. I'm losing control of what I used to feel when I was a young boy. the smiles, the laughter, the sheer happiness. has now faded away. I wish it was different. I wish I felt the way I did back then. It's so hard to change the way I feel now. Very true of my exact feeling right now Link to comment
musicguy Posted January 16, 2008 Author Share Posted January 16, 2008 Very true of my exact feeling right now you were a young boy? Link to comment
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