top bloke

If he was that interested he would be climbing up walls to get to you.  Its nice when someone says they like you but if they dont make the effort do yoursef a favour and disapear

You should get a referal to heart specialist. Your doctor is an idiot. Ditch that scumbag. You havent had a heart attack or bloods would have shown it. Fluid around stomach or legs can be heart disease related. Left heart ventricle damage  or stress on it can cause it. 

I went to hospital on 2 occasions stress test and ecgs were fine but had 99% blockages which were found a few days later after was released from hospital being told I was fine. It was a local heart ct scan which saved my life on both occasions.  Go see a cardiologist your doctor isnt smart enough or thorough enough to rule out angina etc. Better to be safe than sorry

I also love writing too, I use a site called Wattpad where you can post your own stories.

 

Also fanfiction.net is a good site too especially if you're having trouble coming up with your own idea for a story, sometimes it's fun and easier to base your story on another well known story. You can keep the characters and other details the same, but change the plot line.

 

I know there is also a Writers Magazine that you can buy that has lots of great tips on how you can get into writing.

 

Good luck!

 

Thank you

I have seen writers groups and found there is some good advice but I also see that I don't want to be a member because a certain state of mind brings out my creativity which those groups seem also to put me off so I won't be joining. Anonymous alias will allow me to relax into the writings and let thoughts emotions flow

Critics don't phase me. I just want to write for the enjoyment and expression. Thanks for your tips

Over time I have discovered that I love writing .. poetry thoughts..love life death birth...many topics. Where is a good place to write anonymously ? I have been told blogs are the best way to write and develop that more. Advice thoughts recommendations?

All that glitters is not gold..

So appreciate what you have..

before you get too old..

The grass looks greener ..

Over there...

But it too has its problems we miss

Because its easy not to care...

Sometimes life looks depressing..

So on an adventure we will go...

Exciting mysterious...

Yet half way we want to go back home...

Appreciate your problems...

Its how we know we are alive...

And dont get too greedy..

Because it will kick you in the behind...

Hi friends....hope you like it. Be kind to yourselves and always be aware...it could be worse over there so just appreciate your life however it comes.

That is one of the best poems I have ever ever read..huge pat on your back!!

I never think of my poetry but I always write in that fashion..

You came into my life ,

just from no where,

Sense something empty,

Deep inside of me,

You held mmy hand in solace,

An amazing friend indeed,

I think of you quite often,

I hope you never leave,

You helped me see the beauty,

That i possessed inside,

I have since flourshed,

Like a beautiful flower ,

A soul coming on full bloom,

I now understand ,

That life is not just doom,

I am only human,

Yes i make mistakes,

But when things get rocky,

I think of your nurturing words,

And love its on its way,

I have so much understanding ,

You showed the way,

I am blessed to have met you,

I wish good for you every day.

Thank you my great ena friend...I wish you love ..growth and a fruitful life.

,

And so you think this is the end,

But we love your smile my friend,

Some days thing seems so hard,

Yet it seems that salvation is oh so far,

As i read i realise,

That your kind words,

Are like heaven in many peoples eyes,

So when the darkness comes again..start to smile and realise that you have a friend..

Thats just beautiful...

Aww..youre welcome.. Youve just made a grown man blush lol

Its good to see your courage ready2heal. Sometimes we allow those feelings far too long inside... I feel your release ... i can relate to those thoughts which I take to the grave...good on you for letting them out... A powerful poem...

Tb

I pray that they come to pass"

With that day rises a brand new sun

with hope for you to shine along..

Very nice tiredof vampires. Your command of words took me deep into the passages of your mind.. I am sorry for your pain and the sun will rise but once again..

tb

I don't know that for sure....If someone does, they surely don't convey it as eloquently as you did here.

 

I'm glad that you were uplifted by someone when you needed it.

I humbly ..Thank you

tiredofvampires thank you.. You are welcome in your comments and its nice to have such a spiritual person here. Metro girl.. How do you know someone doesnt think this way about you too?

Supa gurl/Ready2hel thanks again but the real thanks belongs to the fantastic lady who inspired these feelings after a very uplifting message..

Well she definitely did but she never knew it thats all.

Well I have been chatting away to someone great lately and yes I am going to do my best to make this attempt to describe the nice feelings and gentleness they have shared with myself . I want them to know that they have been a good influence..

Taken for granted..

there she was..

uncertain about life ,

but certainly a shining star..

I went to look inside

she bit me on the hand..

I jumped 10 feet backwards .

and wondered where I am?

I looked a little closer..

and saw a soul in despair..

I gently reached forward

so you knew that I cared.

I waited to bitten

I was a little afraid.

but when you opened your heart

it was me you saved..

or did I save you?

I talk to you every day

a blessing in disguise..

you have goodness

oozing from your eyes.

I think your very special

and know you will do well

so all those who offend you

I know will burn in hell.

An image in my mind..

of a forest big and vast

where trees skyrocket

and where the mist does bask..

I can see some children

hugging you right now..

because your a mother ..

the love of their lives..

I know that you are great

and so I hang around ..

to see you in your glory

as the time comes around..

when you need some help..

just call out my name..

You have a beautiful mind..

a beautiful soul..and

you look beautiful..

God bless you.. I have grown to

Love you my friend.

Thank you for the honour of getting to know you..

I am here to help..to see you shine at the top of the toppest mountain..

TB.

That is simply brilliant! I loved it....that just took me with it! It wasnt right darn it! They should have held it tight! Fantastic!

I read it and thought about a friend of mine. You're a very talented person, please keep the poems coming.

 

Thank you..for a guy who in real life the words dont always come that easy it is easy when your emotions guide the words

 

 

I really like this. You seem like a natural at poetry, I would never had guessed it had been that long since you last wrote one. You truly have a special friend. How wonderful.

 

I am glad you both liked my poem not for the poem but the way it makes you all feel something inside. The wonderful person that she is and what I have inside ... I am glad you can relate as it tells me something about your feelings to what I have written..and what I am experiencing from this great individual...you have also experienced...very nice...

'Tis a wonderful thing, top bloke. I haven't read much of your posts, but this poems rings beautifully to me in a familiar way.

Thank you soo much for that.. I really appreciate your comment. I just hope she is doing well. I have to go for now bye..

I hope she reads it and draws strength from it herdestiny.. She is a great person..it was just right...

Top Bloke -- What a beautiful poem and I think the person you were thinking of while you wrote it will very much appreciate it.

 

I like the way you compared this person to a bird who was wounded that you knew would be okay...and you pictured in your mind better days when this bird was healthy, happy and strong.

 

From your posts, I'd almost say that you, yourself, were the first wounded bird that you had bumped into, got yourself strong and healthy and lifted yourself up to a better place to be able to be there for the little wounded bird you found later who you could relate to and help to be healthy and strong again.

 

Very nice...

While I have breath in my lungs and a smile on my face no on can stop me uplifting this special friend in this time of need. I will not turn my back on them... I will not turn away.. Sometimes life is so much more beautiful when someone genuinely reaches out talks to us and actually cares.. they are not alone herdestiny... they have a strong friend

Guys ..this is the first poem I have written in 24 years... Please let me know what you think....I hope they know I wish the best for them.. I was overwhelmed by their great personality ..I wanted to help and so the poem was born..