-trapped-soul- Posted May 29, 2004 Share Posted May 29, 2004 trying to live, trying to breathe, feel so nieve, to Think I could have trusted you, to think I couldve been friends, both us two... caught in my fury, defending to my personal jury, caught in your web, trying to breathe, feel so nieve, to have trusted you, to think of us two, it wasnt at all new, it had happened before, you slammed the door, you should have heard me roar! hang me with your noose, make sure it aint loose, kill me like a sorry goose, til my vains turn, til my heart, it burns, i know you, its all no big concern, what matters the most, is im dead, my red blood, it feeds the earth. like a memorable new birth, caught in my fury, defending to my personal jury, caught in your web, trying to breathe, feel so nieve, to have trusted you, to think of us two, it wasnt at all new, it had happened before, you slammed the door, you should have heard me roar! you all saw, my life it flashed so quick, it all, it all makes me sick! let my blood fill my grave, dont let me be saved, im a mortal sick human to you, it all means nothing to you too! Link to comment
abcd1234 Posted May 31, 2004 Share Posted May 31, 2004 This is a great poem, is this directly related to anything that you are going through at the moment? If you want to talk then feel free to PM me or make a post in the forum. abcd1234 Link to comment
Buli Posted December 9, 2005 Share Posted December 9, 2005 This is my first ever poem - if it qualifies as one. I had always been interested in poetry. I could hear other people who had written a beautiful piece but could not do justice as far as delivery is concerned. This piece came to me as a surprise as I could not believe that I actually did come up with such words. It came to me one midnight a couple of months ago as I was meditating after a nice joint, at a village in the Eastern Cape, South Africa. Last Night I Saw God Last night I saw God He was deep in the villages of the Eastern Cape He was in the beauty of the surrounding mountains of Khiba He was in the curveous landscape He was in the big blue bright sky In the brisk light of the moon In the few stars scattered in the sky He was in me For I am a unique creature of God Last Night I Saw God Link to comment
ShySoul Posted December 9, 2005 Share Posted December 9, 2005 -trapped-soul- That was a great poem. If you read this, hope everything worked out for you. Buli - Nice poem as well. If you want to share more feel free to start your own new thread. Link to comment
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