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I'm huddled up with my knees to my chest

Rocking back and forth to an unknown beat

I turned my back to the world today

To get over it, to admit defeat

 

I try then fail to lock feelings away

They keep on making me helpless and weak

The joy and pain of emotions are sweet

When the bloom of despair is not at its peak

 

I'm still drawn to your flame like a small silly moth

Atop my knees there is now my face

All your words mean something only to me

Everybody knows I'm a head hopeless case

 

All I want is to hide but I can't decide how

Crystal clear paths; yours, theirs, mine

I was probably meant to watch you all live

If I don't need to exist, fine

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hey

wow i thought that poem was great, it was very deep and i can relate especially with what is happening to me right now. i have read a few of your poems and think your a great writer so keep it up

~LJ =;

 

Thank you, you make me feel great by liking my poetry.

 

Here is something I just wrote:

 

You don't seem to understand

I can't force myself to explain

From time to time I'm diving deep

Into the whirlpool of snow white pain

 

There's nothing wrong about being self-centered

We are what we are by nature, it's right

Once your interior blows with this anguish

You've known the taste of losing the light

 

The last thing I want is to make you feel guilty

It's not your fault, the problem is mine

However, care means being warm inside

It would be enough to ask: 'Are you fine?'

 

I wonder how I could go that far

Now recognizing my paths' track

It will be good, I let it all out

Just give me my broken life back!

 

Cheers!

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hey

aww thanks, i really liked that poem too, if you want to share any others im all ears.

 

~LJ =;

 

Thank you.

 

Here we go.

 

From caress to indifference

Either right or wrong

Being two-faced and puzzling

Could you last for long?!

 

She sheds her skins

The essense is ultimate

If you do the same

Think twice, it's intimate

 

Both minds are twisted

There is no doubt

Her all craves for backup

That's what it's about

 

Look around yourself

See the sacrificed

Hurt her one more time

She is mesmerized

 

Everything is inconstant

Wounds like opened doors

She will not let go

The choice is yours

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I could try and get myself out of this place

If you didn't rub off your indistinct trace

 

Now someone must take me away from here

To the realm of happiness we should steer

 

In those depths echos a silent scream

For these torments are more than a wicked whim

 

I sense presense of yours then feel satiated

My nature was newly invigorated

 

Pitiful humans need just a bit

Emotional polychrome tends to hit

 

Nothing will crush the hidden potential

Temptation of giving is too influential

 

Letting go everything that restricts our limit

Deadly fraud may rule when they've proved us timid

 

You are still caged which I know for sure

Revive, join the dance or forget about cure

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I am feeling your pain when you are down

Reaching out my hands

to the martyr's crown.

 

The dazzling silence has made me blind

Not being numb

like a soul in the grind.

 

I will dance on the broken glass by your side

Without asking myself

about fatuous pride.

 

The feelings seem as if they were stars

Showing up everywhere

in your absense that chars.

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A countenance that is haunting your mind,

familiar and plain.

When he vanishes gratiutously into the night,

you both go insane.

 

A picture-a cloud that is curdling again

above your laugh.

Raining down the same, taking over the place

when you walk the path.

 

A moment you was lucky to catch

of his distant life.

A glance the eyes bear stuck in them-

Nothingness and drive.

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I barely made it through today

again.

The days are all the same.

A thought I cannot turn away:

Is it my fault? Is it your aim?

 

I'm tired of this feeling-

pain.

It chilled me to the bone.

I haven't seen your sun for weeks,

Too long, too far from home.

 

I know you are right there,

somewhere.

My tears now glow and sound.

I want to burst out crying loud

Falling to the ground.

 

Where do we go from here?

Nowhere..

I still believe in love.

For those who don't: Through all the time

you'll never rise above.

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hey wow i really liked those poems, i thought they were really good, i especially liked the last one.

 

mainly this stanza:

 

I know you are right there,

somewhere.

My tears now glow and sound.

I want to burst out crying loud

Falling to the ground.

 

maybe you could share these with the rest of the forum, im sure they would give you some advice and opinions on them, and im sure they would really like to read them, they are reallly good.

 

keep writing

~LJ =;

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  • 2 months later...

Is back occasionally

 

When my sun sets,

By a taper,

I take out my pen and paper.

 

Happy once,

Now full of sadness -

Going high and low is madness.

 

Stay away,

You always do!

I have lost my patience, too.

 

Come, change, come,

I'm not a moaner,

Just a loner, loner..

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New poems..

 

My inmost soul,

my inner self

or selves?

Ambivalent. Yes and no.

 

The wanted thing, both mute

and calling,

what is it?

Lack of gratitude.

 

Hello again, Ms Conscience,

speak

then listen:

I can't stand your whistle!

 

There is a goal

born long ago -

hush! -

I will never let it go.

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Another one..

 

There are so many freaks

but not enough circuses

They despise everybody

taken by shallow purposes

 

My friend, yes, you are special

just like everyone else

Ha ha, do you now get it,

slave of social spells?

 

Not at all is it sensible:

Arrogance for no reason

I regret to inform you:

Your mind is your own prison!

 

What makes us all human

is long ago gone

Pride, wrath, envy, lust, sloth,

celebrate: we are done!

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Denying the face of God

Rejecting the idea of Belief

I still hear angels singing above me

and demons growling underneath.

 

Together we cut the thorns of life

During our voyage to the Milky Way

"One can never ever be truly happy

without knowing the pain," I say

 

Watch in awe my solo flight

I am free to fly, aeria gloris

Pull me back again – my feet touch the ground -

and revive the dreams of past glories.

 

There is no other way out

but to deeply breathe for more

The depths of longing rise,

while the spirits fall to the core.

 

Human beings live eagerly when

they are lucky enough to have a good reason

If you stand alone, your existence must be

nothing else than a boring season.

 

Neverendless race makes us feel alive

Not to fall on the run, just not to forget

How to dream, how to love, how to yearn for what's left

We will be able, I bet!

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Thanks!

 

Dedicated to [...]

 

Out of sight, out of heart

Not a such, I'm torn apart

 

Am I blind? I cannot see

Who you are you'll always be

 

"Hope dies last, again, just wait,"

Mind says, "No, it is too late!"

 

I will soon forget the past

and get rid of you at last!

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Dang sorry you had so much pain. I would like to say that I loved your first poem... and it made me read the rest. I wasn't as satisfied with most as much as the first and the last one on the third page

 

When my sun sets,

By a taper,

I take out my pen and paper.

 

Happy once,

Now full of sadness -

Going high and low is madness.

 

Stay away,

You always do!

I have lost my patience, too.

 

Come, change, come,

I'm not a moaner,

Just a loner, loner..

 

But I enjoyed your style of writing. I would like to say, chear up... Your mind works in a similar pattern as mine when you write, and its really interesting to read. Keep it up.

 

ForAnother

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I understand, I think we are all like that

 

When we are depressed it is usually the most angst we feel in our lives (especially when we are young) so it is very heart felt... as opposed to something light hearted... its just interesting... its why the media reports bad news... simply because its interesting.

 

ForAnother

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