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a person in the forum was asking for a poem or something to put with some roses for valentines day to help him with a girl. this is what i wrote for him to use.

 

i saw this rose and it made me think of you

u make me swoon like you dont have a clue

when im with you, there is no way i can be blue

u shine brighter then these crimson pettles do

i hope that you like this gift from a heart true

because no flower is as beautiful as you

 

i figured, anything to help out a fellow lonely guy

 

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Im sorry I didnt use your idea. I got many responses and I decided to go with " Every petal on this rose is a soft kiss from me" or something of that nature. I cant remember exactly what it was though. I still appreciate the response. The reason I didnt use yours wasnt cause I thought it wasnt good, it was, the reason was that I dont quite think that she is the type of person who would appreciate the poem. She wants things to be short and sweet. Great idea though, maybe someone else will use it.

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