B4551C Posted December 10, 2013 Share Posted December 10, 2013 Anxiously awaiting the culmination of desire, to quell the deep sea of emotion which ne'er allows definement. Your eyes, a portal to your soul, show me what you yearn to be. Your touch, the power caused shudders through my spine; Echoing and reverberating through my body and mind. Just then I could feel your soul touch mine ever so slightly. At last, the lips of lovers danced an eternal dance. A vortex of desire poured into my body, seeped down through my chest and made me weak. I held you tighter and you embraced my shattered ego with a natural nurture. The physical boundaries dissolved and fizzled away. I looked in your eyes once more and suddenly I came to a realization. I like this girl. Link to comment
Phoenixfire Posted April 17, 2014 Share Posted April 17, 2014 I love it. It is short but articulated, flowing from one line to the next. It sounds like how my first kiss felt, and as a fellow writer I think that is all you can ask for, to other feel like you did Link to comment
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