"Heart..."

This is another poem I wrote recently, inspired by the writing and work of others on this site... I appreciate any feedback as it will ultimately help me improve my work, and I really hope you enjoy

A heart, scarred by the darkness and pain,

Sheltered from the storm and sheltered from the rain,

Suddenly breaking free of protection,

Searching despite the constant misdirection,

Looking for someone to have and to hold,

Transforming from being quite shy to quite bold,

Fighting against those who wish to defeat it,

Praying to find the other half to complete it,

Temptation and darkness waiting so eager,

As I struggle for brave to overcome meager,

Found by one who was selfish and cruel,

Dropped crushed and cut, called out like a fool,

The heart sought refuge, weighed down by the sorrow,

Unable to see the possibilities of tomorrow,

Until one day two gentle hands,

Picked up this poor heart but made no demands,

Giving compassion and truth never ending,

Refusing to break, instead always bending,

This kindness and love taught the heart how to live,

Being no more afraid and learning to forgive,

For the heart which helped to heal my pain,

Was cut and scarred the very same,

Hurt by others but still strong,

Able to keep moving along,

Driven by life, love, and laughter,

Searching for an ever after,

That heart helped mine to heal and grow and I think I finally get it,

Those who live their lives in fear and anger will regret it,

But those who help each other grow and teach others to forgive,

While everyone must die they are the only ones who truly live.

I love it! It speaks to me on many levels, very inspiring

I love it! It speaks to me on many levels, very inspiring

 

I'm very glad you liked it

Wow...This gave me goosebumps. You did an amazing job!

Thank you very much