"be"

A little poem I wrote in English. I had to use words that rhymed with "be". It was something I did in about 5 minutes but I was just wondering what you all thought.

I was hoping I wasn't the only one to understand it.

To be here is to be

free from immaturity

like alonedom is free

free like a bee

in nature and

prosperity

Happy when I am in fact

lonely and angry when I'm

crowded without empathy

flee to tranquility

and subside with glee.

must have been tough but you made it sound pretty way to go, I like it.

This poem is fantastic. Very creative! I thought it had a really unique flow to it, too. Nicely done.

I like it =)