I Saw You Today.

I saw someone who looked like you today

I tried not to stare but I couldn’t look away

Her eyes were like yours and the way she wore her hair

I wonder what she thought when she saw me standing there

I tried to turn away but my muscles just froze

And as I tried to shut my eyes, they just wouldn’t close

My heart kicked up feeling that I just couldn't trace

As she walked right past me and I looked at her face....

I thought I saw you today but it was just the way she wore her hair

And I realize these days I just see you everywhere……..

Beautiful......

That's very well written.

Aww Dags! That's beautiful!

Very nice!

Thanks guys, it's one of those poems that's been rattling around my head for a week. It's actually about an experience I had walking through a supermarket one afternoon.

you already know how i feel......... hugs to you........

oh my god... this is an amazing poem. i'm saving it if you dont mind. bravo!

Very nice!!!

you already know how i feel......... hugs to you........

Hugs to you to indie (((hugs)))

oh my god... this is an amazing poem. i'm saving it if you dont mind. bravo!

Wow, thanks EqD. Yes by all means save it if you like.

i vote this as my favorite poem ever posted on ENA

Lovely poem! It reminds me of the rod stewart song 'you are everything' - I love that song, same sentiment. *sigh*

tis beautiful

esp. the last line

And I realize these days I just see you everywhere……..

aww i love it

Very very nice. Hit very close to home. thank-you. and aye... I will save this one, if you don't mind.

Another beauty from the wizard, the poet, the heart that knows so much...Dags.

This is just wonderful. You have a gift for creating a pathway of lines, and bringing it to a climax of meaning at the end. I just love the build-up that comes to rest at those last lines. Bravo! And another...

Thanks for all the lovely comments you guys. They all mean a lot to me and give me inspiration to pull my finger out and write some more.

Do it, do it! Share with us....

Thank you Dags, just thank you.

Beautiful and touching.

I love to come onto this section to just read sometimes. Its nice when you can find some peices that just speak to you, you know the feeling?

I find that your writings always touch hearts. That at least someone always gets something extra from what your work. Often more then just the one person too. So thankyou not only for sharing this beautiful poem, but for all the times you hit too close to home.

It's beautiful but so sad "Dagless".

Hugs.

Very pretty

3] Love this poem. Again. I came back here today after a longggggg time away and was surprised to see this one at the top of the charts again. Brought a smile to my face because......

once again it hit home and touched me. Thanx.

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heartbreaking and beautifully genuine... thank you for this, Dagless.

Wow, what a lovely surprise. I wasn't expecting people to be posting comments on this so long after I had written it. Thanks guys, all your coments mean a lot to me.