Kiragon Posted September 14, 2007 Share Posted September 14, 2007 lol I wrote this poem out something past midnight a few months ago for a girl I liked, too bad I just gave it to her the wrong time...lol ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I lie awake and pray That you will look my way I have all this longing in my heart I knew it right from the start When I close my eyes at night I See things in black and white I've only got you inside my mind You know you have made me blind Then I close my eyes again The only thing that's clear to me Is your face touching me with your smile I want you to stay a little while, longer When I stand infront of the mirror One day I want to see you and me Entwine with one another I want you to be my lover... Oh my pretty girl, I love you Like I never ever loved anybody before you About that, there's nothing I can do I don't want to ever forget you Pretty girl of mine Just tell me you love me too I need you I really really do Let me inside Don't be complied Don't brush aside Instead, help me make our hearts collide... Link to comment
Kiragon Posted September 15, 2007 Author Share Posted September 15, 2007 Lol nobody replying just viewing...Am I that bad? Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted September 15, 2007 Share Posted September 15, 2007 Not bad at all, especially for someone your age. The Poetry Forum just doesn't get a lot of attention here. A lot of girls would be very happy to get a sincere love poem like that. Nice avatar, btw. Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted September 16, 2007 Share Posted September 16, 2007 Thats really beautiful! That is one super lucky girl. Seriously, its like alot of girls dream to have a guy love her so much he will write something for her. Did she like it? Link to comment
aMisname Posted September 17, 2007 Share Posted September 17, 2007 pretty, i like it. i'm gonna make my bf write one lolz Link to comment
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