Who Was She?

Hello everyone.

I am rather embarrassed to post this under my real username, hence the Ålter Ego username. Maybe I'll reveal myself. Maybe not.

Who was she?

There once was a woman

Who was named Sarah

Or maybe it was Dawn

Suzanne or Farrah

She was in her mid twenties

On the cusp of Sagittarius

Or maybe in her early thirties

With her moon in Aquarius

With strawberry blonde hair

That she wore in a bun

And sparkling emerald eyes

That would tango with the sun

I saw her during my lunch breaks

Which always brightened my day

But I never had the courage

To express what I am about to say

If I only had the courage

To tell her how I felt

About the way she smiled

That would make my heart melt

If I only had the courage

To let her know that I exist

Then maybe last night

We would've shared our first kiss

Instead I write this poem

As I lament the time

That I never had the courage

To ask her to be mine

She was here in a heartbeat

Now she's gone in a whisper

And I sit here alone

Regretting that I miss her

Who was she? Who is she?

And what will she be?

I will never know

Because she will never be with me

That's n awesome poem

That was very well written!!!! awesome. I like it.

hmmmmm?? who was she?? mores the point... who are you

very well phrased and the rhyming sequence is incredible. i like it =)

Thank you so much everyone, I appreciate the comments.

You never know what the future may hold. You may run into her again one day. But otherwise, learn from it and next time you have a chance like that, go for it.

Nice poem.

That Sig... its FUNNY.....

Now... who would own such a pithy sig..hmmmmm

Dako???

Our very own enotalone mystery. Who is alter ego's, alter ego? It's not me.... or is it?

LOL! It's like "Scooby Doo" with the mysteries.

Love the Poem, Alter!

Perhaps you've got a hero complex...live your real life without your mask, eh?

LOL! It's like "Scooby Doo" with the mysteries.

And he would have gotten away with it if it weren't for those kids and that mangy mutt.

If I solve the mystery, do I get a scooby snack?

If I solve the mystery, do I get a scooby snack?

Ok I am game. No cheating.

On no.... now I've been challenged. Performance anxiety. Anyone want to help me here? Or at least can I have a hint? Make it as cryptic as you want, just something to go on so it isn't anyone of the thousand plus members on the site. Have to give us a sporting chance.

I am not good at giving hints or clues. But if you use your noggin you can figure it out. You see,

My poem is the clue

For the answer you wish to delve

When I wrote about my pain

As the clock struck twelve

Three hundred and seventy four

Add one when it's tomorrow

For I am the one

Who speaks of nothing but sorrow...

Good grief, I can usually figure lots of stuff out, but I'm too darn sleepy! LOL! Maybe the suspense will allow us all to benefit from further poetry? I won't even try to wrap my brain around this...but someone will. Velma! Freddie?

Velma! Freddie?

Scappy Doo?

Ok, so you think I should be able to get it. Does that mean I have spoken to you personally or at least answered one of your posts?

Nothing but sorrow.... could really describe any number of people on here.

Three hundred seventy four, adding one daily.... could that mean days? As in how long you've been posting?

Speaking of regret of not talking to a girl, so I know what the sorrow is about. You posted on another thread about shyness being bad and not having good points, so I take it you are a fellow shy guy.

Names are popping into my head, but I'm not positive. Am I on the right track so far?

uggghhh..

"On the tail of my shadow"

Ok.. so I am a libra and a brunette.. that counts me out.

"On the tail of my shadow....????"

Scratching our butts screaming

You've set our minds awhirl

Chasing shadows, pickles creaming

You're as sneaky as a squirrel

How many pen about sorrow

Threads are littered with tears

Will take me longer than tomorrow

To dig through all the fears

Come out come out, where ever you are

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Give us another clue better than…

Pen of Sorrow

Beautiful shadow, simple beautiful.

I loved that Shadow. I just read it and had to edit my post. Very nice indeed. I was going to quote ShySoul, but I would've given it away with my riddles. You are on the right track though, Mr. Soul. I am dancing around your soul as a clone.

Here is one last clue...

To find out who I really am

And cease the suspense from growing

My other avatar is the symbol

That means Forever Flowing

Avatar..... forever flowing..... going to do a search now.... you clearly aren't my first guess though..... he's avatar clearly doesn't mean that.

I know I'm weeks behind the rest of you, but did anyone ever figure out the true identity? ... 'cause I really do know who he is.

Am I too late? Can I still guess and win the prize? [jumping up and down, raising hand]

Miss M, the identity was uncovered. But if you can guess correctly, I'll give you a special prize.

I'm curious to find out who this guy is myself.

I'm curious to find out who this guy is myself.

LOL, And I'm sooo amazed nobody has figured out it YOU!!! Hahaha

 

Clever boy!

 

EDIT: Oh wait, ShySoul said the identiy was discovered? Who discovered it? I'm so late. I saw the clues long ago, but I didn't know there was a guessing game going on. hehe

 

KO, you're REALLY a talented writer. Man, why to you hide yourself away so much?

Thank you, Miss M. I was embarrassed because I never wrote a poem before this one.

No one actually discovered it. When I replied to one of the threads, I didn't realize I was doing it under this username. After I posted it, I had a rather loud Homer Simpson moment. ](*,)