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Iam on a boat..alone

just too far from anything

i have to close my eyes to see..where iam heading

to accept the reality

where is the shore?

i open my eyes

but all i can see is a reflection of me,the boat&the endless sea

where am i going?

in this long cruise with me

iam trapped in this endless freedom

the wind moves everything..the sail,the waves of the sea

but not a move in my long dark hair or the dress on me

just myself&the boat

but safe is not even near

i know one thing..iam not lost

but my heart is filled with fear

 

hi everyone,i just hope if u could give me your opinion on this poem,thanks.

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