A Posted May 24, 2005 Share Posted May 24, 2005 Iam on a boat..alone just too far from anything i have to close my eyes to see..where iam heading to accept the reality where is the shore? i open my eyes but all i can see is a reflection of me,the boat&the endless sea where am i going? in this long cruise with me iam trapped in this endless freedom the wind moves everything..the sail,the waves of the sea but not a move in my long dark hair or the dress on me just myself&the boat but safe is not even near i know one thing..iam not lost but my heart is filled with fear hi everyone,i just hope if u could give me your opinion on this poem,thanks. Link to comment
AzureSkyes69 Posted May 24, 2005 Share Posted May 24, 2005 I like it is very nice... sounds like what I am going through at the moment ..LOL Link to comment
mattj Posted May 24, 2005 Share Posted May 24, 2005 very good- exactly the theme of the poem im working on right now in fact so back to the drawing board lol! anyways nice poem Link to comment
A Posted May 24, 2005 Author Share Posted May 24, 2005 thank u guys for reading my poem ,iam happy that u liked it. Link to comment
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