Honesty

Awwwwwwww. That is so heartfelt and emotive. If i was her i'd be flattered.

Okay. It's Whitney Houston's I will always love you and S Club 7's Never had a dream come true combined. You shouldn't claim other people's lyrics dude..anybody can be a poet, just let your pen do the writing.

I shall. It's good to try and write about situations that don't necessarily relate to yourself. Thanks for your response anyway, I appreciate it.

Hey Pocket Rocket. Thankyou for caring and taking the time to read and reply..but this rhyme is not about me. It's a made up rhyme that I know happens all the time. Thanks anyway, appreciate it.

Tired of everything..I need a fresh start from it all, It's like the higher I build myself up the harder I fall, And I just lost the man I love..found out his heart was so cruel, But still I'm miserable being apart from the fool, Soon, I'll have no heart left at all..feel so much hate and despise, Believe I'm not worth very much, so i don't aim very high, And you know who I blame for the strain..and the pain in my eyes? See so much evil, I feel I got a part of Satan inside. Just at work and started typing and that's what came out. Not really a poem, just a random rhyme. Feel free to critique or just read. Not really relating to me, just situations and people around me.

Aww..that's so nice! Thankyou very much. *Hug*

Thankyou very much. There's been a lot of views but hardly any replies. It's a taboo subject but happens every day. I'm actually in the process of recording this and putting it on my demo CD. Thanks for looking.

That last verse is very powerful. Very good piece. Very relatable and easy to read. Keep writing.

Just to point out this is not relating to me. It's my own observations and the world surrounding me. I'll be recording this this weekend. My music is not intended to hurt or anything like that..it's my way of expression and it is a subject close to my heart. This is verse 2 of 3 verses..I chose not to post the whole song. The song is about 2 bullies..this is verse 2. So it gets worse..I'll tell you about bully number two, He said one day ''I know life's hard, let me make it fun for you''.. And at that point my vulnerability wouldn't have guessed.. That he'd proceed to take every bit of childhood I had left, First he put his hand on my thigh, then he let out a sigh.. And said if I told anybody about this then I'd die.. But death can't be worse than this, life hurts like hell.. As he gets closer all I can breathe is his dirty smell.. I try to break free from all his squeezing and stroking, But he pins me down on the floor and says it's me that's provoked him.. I mean what the hell..is it me, am I the reason he's pokin? Is it my fault that he's sweating, heavy breathing and moaning.. All feeling and groping..now I'm frightened as hell, He reaches down in a hurry and untightens his belt.. And as I scream..he tells me not to cry, to stay calm.. He shoves a gag around my mouth and he ties up my arms.. Then he pulls my top up..and he just stares and he grins, Tells me there's so much to do he don't know where to begin.. And at that point nothing in the world's as scary as him.. Then there's the most EXCRUCIATING pain as he TEARS at me SKIN! Burnt between my legs so bad, I was afraid I was dying.. He's pushing and groaning..and I'm shaking and crying.. Feel like I'm drowning in his sweat, I can't breathe..he's suffocating me.. God if you exist, please show yourself this man is RAPING me.. But no he kept going til he was done, then rolled off of me.. But even now as I write I can still feel him on top of me.. I remember all his licking and gruntin..his * * * * *ing and thrusting.. And the feeling he gave me of feeling sick and disgusting. But this wasn't a one off.. or one bad mistake.. If we're alone, any chance he has, he'll take.. PLEASE, Someone help, stop me feeling lonely and scared.. But it's pointless hoping, coz I know that nobody cares.

If it's an actual boyfriend, I love it. A first date and he was close to me kissing, and got hard..Not so sure. But guess they can't help it!