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Supa_gurl

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Supa_gurl last won the day on June 29 2008

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  1. I really like this. You seem like a natural at poetry, I would never had guessed it had been that long since you last wrote one. You truly have a special friend. How wonderful.
  2. Actually after she wrote it she told us (my sister and I) that she wrote for my sister. My sister is 21 and has only had one boyfriend. lol
  3. The writings of an 8 year old, aspiring to be like her talented father. I am joyful and fun Though I have only had one boyfriend it makes me sad so come please the one lad that I need.
  4. Wow. this is a lovely poem. Great writing and so true.
  5. This is lovely. I am glad you get to reconnect.
  6. Wowie! That is a beautifully sad poem. So much pain in the words....But Beautiful
  7. The rain comes Pouring from my eyes Tired of feeling lost Trapped in this disguise Where did I go Can you find me I am so lost Why should this be You loved me I thought forever But so many mistakes makes me feel like never I want some trust But alas- I only see your disgust.
  8. It's a viscious cycle I must admit There are some things I just don't get Why do we hurt so much Do you think Love should hurt as such? You hurt me I hurt you You hurt me, why should this be? Love conquers all So they say I hope to get past this hurt someday
  9. You either are a very skill writer or just very lonely. Either way your poems make me smile.
  10. Depressing. But shows talent. I am not a poet, so I can not critique. But as a reader it sounds good.
  11. This is a good poem. but i hope it is not you. This is a good outlet for feelings and you are very talented.
  12. only one way works for me, and i will leave it at that.
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