InvisibleWound

This is sweet and nice. A true look into what some people probably feel when in a long distance relationship or in love with someone they never met. My first love was someone in my province 5 hours away, we did meet eventually... It never lasted, we were on and off again for almost 2 years. Aside from some emotional abuse, it was the best relationship I ever had. Thank you for sharing, this reminded me of how I felt years ago about someone. Nicely wrote, hope to read more from you =)

Its late in the day and I think I’ll go away I will slip into the night like a lost soul wandering the streets Just enough time to escape from this pit of doom you call life I hate faking this love and I can’t stand to have my heart broken again Not by you or anyone I wanted to stay and make it work I wanted to try but you took me for granted and killed all love and feeling that I had I gave up believing or hoping for change Nothing I do seems to be good enough for you Our love life keeps dying but we keep living a life of troubled lovers Where is the will to make it work? I am going away into the night to say goodbye to what I feel is dead With the new sunrise I will quest on to a better place © IvisibleWound 2/12/2008

For the past 14 months that I been having sex it varies. Even when I lost my virginity to my boyfriend we did it maybe 3 - 6 times a week, it was different weekly. I can't remember when our sex life kept going down, months ago. There were a couple months where we only had sex once and yes we live together, so it would seem as though something is wrong. As of 3 months ago, we would every so many days, roughly on average its been 4 - 6 times a month as of recent. There have been a lot of factors, but lately I have hated sex anyways, I never get off anymore from it, and he is lucky to last 2 minutes anyways. I am so jealous of the people getting it daily or even 3 - 5 times a week

I love your poetry so much. You can write beautifuly with such great realness and raw emotion. Some of your stuff reminds me of my very own writings... Awesome poem, I loved it.

Thank you so much

In another time we held each other like there was no end Just me and you together in a place that doesn't exist to their peeping eyes We are closed in around a field of love and it continues growing even after we are gone from its surrounding I remember our last day together It was the first time we kissed and felt so free All I wanted was to hold your hand and feel the joy of love But then she seen us and grabbed you from me That was the last day I seen you I laid there for hours hugging myself wishing you were here You kept whispering that someday we would be able to walk around the world Love each other without jealousy and all the bad things that come with love and regret Even though I can't see you now I know we will always have feelings strong forever And when we finally see each other again I know our love will grow again and again Dedicated To: Patrick

Nice... I liked it

Thanks Moxi crimefighter

Thanks all

They expect me to choose between two gates My soul cannot decide for they both are wrong for me Someone like me One gate is golden and beautiful Its not for someone who has caused so much pain Its for those perfect people and the ones who help others in a time of need The other gate is ugly and grey Its plain just like me It seems to fit my personality so perfectly If I go through that gate I will never come back Time passes like the sun rises accross the open seas I am lost between two gates and the world can plainly see There is no life on the other side waiting for me

Sad and depressing. I find that to be some of the best poetry though, it speaks the loudest sometimes. I enjoyed your writing, it was very good! Awesome job