Reality Earth Show

fallingisfun · 08-06-2004, 12:41 PM

Factual falsities and truth misconstrued
The needy get greedy, the smart get confused
Sins are forgiven to be done once more
Waves of impatience crash into lusts' shore

Hearing and feeling, the smell of the past
Wonder and yearning, time trickles so fast
Climbing mountains and falling from crags
Empty souls fill our cumbersome bags

Heaven's gates guide you to hell's inferno
War and death is a reality Earth show
Grow to shrink, and be one with the ground
Yelling to fight contradicting sounds

Conquer the universe, complicate Earth
Living to die, dying to give birth
Sudden and slow, the wheels get turned
Freezing, so cold that it creates a burn

Time is forsaken, greed comes for free
Lives get taken, from seed comes a tree
Lovers get lost, storms violently rage
Hatred corrupts, here on Earth's stage

Stinkweed · 08-06-2004, 02:53 PM

That's an excellent poem, plus everything you say is so true... Keep up the good work =D>

neva_black_n_white · 08-06-2004, 03:35 PM

I have to agree with dead eyes on this one it really was an excellance, be proud because i dont often use the word excellant, but i deffinitley liked it, i thought you were true with you words, and i think sometimes people forget the trate of actually being realistic, im glad you shared this one with us!!

Kel

fallingisfun · 08-06-2004, 03:45 PM

Thank you!

i_hate_the_world47 · 08-06-2004, 08:42 PM

That was a great poem.I have read some of your poems and your a good poet.Keep it up.

~Meagan~

fallingisfun · 08-09-2004, 09:03 AM

Thanks everyone!

08-06-2004, 12:41 PM	#1
fallingisfun Offline Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 32	Reality Earth Show Factual falsities and truth misconstrued The needy get greedy, the smart get confused Sins are forgiven to be done once more Waves of impatience crash into lusts' shore Hearing and feeling, the smell of the past Wonder and yearning, time trickles so fast Climbing mountains and falling from crags Empty souls fill our cumbersome bags Heaven's gates guide you to hell's inferno War and death is a reality Earth show Grow to shrink, and be one with the ground Yelling to fight contradicting sounds Conquer the universe, complicate Earth Living to die, dying to give birth Sudden and slow, the wheels get turned Freezing, so cold that it creates a burn Time is forsaken, greed comes for free Lives get taken, from seed comes a tree Lovers get lost, storms violently rage Hatred corrupts, here on Earth's stage __________________ Don't take life so seriously, you won't make it out alive.

08-06-2004, 02:53 PM	#2
Stinkweed Offline Gold Member Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Some place other than where I wish I were... Gender: None Specified Age: 21 Posts: 2,667	That's an excellent poem, plus everything you say is so true... Keep up the good work =D> __________________ "You just change for the same..." -Ian Mackaye "Punk rock saved my life" -Dennes Boon (R.I.P.) "Have you ever seen lips that sing on a face that screams?" -Jesse Michaels

08-06-2004, 03:35 PM	#3
neva_black_n_white Offline Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: yorkshire Gender: Female Age: 21 Posts: 2,145	I have to agree with dead eyes on this one it really was an excellance, be proud because i dont often use the word excellant, but i deffinitley liked it, i thought you were true with you words, and i think sometimes people forget the trate of actually being realistic, im glad you shared this one with us!! Kel __________________ When love cuts blind 20-20 vision. Its better to remain quiet and be thought of as a fool than to speak and remove all doubt!

08-06-2004, 03:45 PM	#4
fallingisfun Offline Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 32	Thank you! __________________ Don't take life so seriously, you won't make it out alive.

08-06-2004, 08:42 PM	#5
i_hate_the_world47 Offline Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: California Age: 19 Posts: 915	That was a great poem.I have read some of your poems and your a good poet.Keep it up. ~Meagan~ __________________ Whatever it takes....i know i can make it through

08-09-2004, 09:03 AM	#6
fallingisfun Offline Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 32	Thanks everyone! __________________ Don't take life so seriously, you won't make it out alive.