Murder

shorty20 · 08-23-2005, 04:32 PM

Just to let you guys know, this isn't a true story... just letting some anger out... parts of it are true, but I let my emotions carry me away with this one, lol... let me know what you guys think....

Hands clasped over my ears
I taste the salt of my tears

I try to block it out
Pretend I don't hear
The angry voices in the hall
I try my best not to fear
My sister's crying now
But Daddy's not done
And as I hear his voice raise
I know he's just begun
I'm hiding in my closet
Trying hard not to be scared
But I know when Daddy's drunk
His judgment is impaired
I hear his fists pounding
Her cries I hear no more
Then all is silent
As I hear the slam of the front door
I slowly creep from my hiding place
And cautiously open the door
My eyes fill with tears again
Her body's crumpled on the floor
The carpet's covered in red
And I rush to her side
God, don't let her be dead
I cradle her lifeless body
As I try to find the phone
But there's nothing to be done
And I realize I'm not alone
I look up to see
His malicious grin
And I grimace in pain
At the blow to my abdomen
I try to run away
Try to break free
But I saw what he did
And now he'll kill me
I crawl to the kitchen
Dragging him at my feet
I'm trying, I'm fighting
These waves of defeat
I will not give in
Not to this creep
I grabe a kitchen knife
And thrust it in deep
The look in his eyes
So cold, so full of hate
My adrenalin is pumping strong
I'm in an awfull state
I just killed my father
Murdered him with a kitchen knife
I murdered my father
To avenge my sister's life

cam4u · 08-23-2005, 04:35 PM

Wow..........wow......DEEEEEP Thanks for sharing, It's good to let the anger out in such a constructive way.

shorty20 · 08-23-2005, 05:01 PM

what's free form?

neva_black_n_white · 08-24-2005, 12:54 PM

Me and my twin are loving it, i think it comes together at the end, you deffinitley round it up well.. love it

kell and the lee x

08-23-2005, 04:32 PM	#1
shorty20 Offline Bronze Member Join Date: May 2005 Location: Nebraska Gender: Female Age: 24 Posts: 1,087	Murder Just to let you guys know, this isn't a true story... just letting some anger out... parts of it are true, but I let my emotions carry me away with this one, lol... let me know what you guys think.... Hands clasped over my ears I taste the salt of my tears I try to block it out Pretend I don't hear The angry voices in the hall I try my best not to fear My sister's crying now But Daddy's not done And as I hear his voice raise I know he's just begun I'm hiding in my closet Trying hard not to be scared But I know when Daddy's drunk His judgment is impaired I hear his fists pounding Her cries I hear no more Then all is silent As I hear the slam of the front door I slowly creep from my hiding place And cautiously open the door My eyes fill with tears again Her body's crumpled on the floor The carpet's covered in red And I rush to her side God, don't let her be dead I cradle her lifeless body As I try to find the phone But there's nothing to be done And I realize I'm not alone I look up to see His malicious grin And I grimace in pain At the blow to my abdomen I try to run away Try to break free But I saw what he did And now he'll kill me I crawl to the kitchen Dragging him at my feet I'm trying, I'm fighting These waves of defeat I will not give in Not to this creep I grabe a kitchen knife And thrust it in deep The look in his eyes So cold, so full of hate My adrenalin is pumping strong I'm in an awfull state I just killed my father Murdered him with a kitchen knife I murdered my father To avenge my sister's life __________________ ~It's not about waiting for the storm to pass.... it's about learning to dance in the rain~

08-23-2005, 04:35 PM	#2
cam4u Offline Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 25	Wow..........wow......DEEEEEP Thanks for sharing, It's good to let the anger out in such a constructive way. __________________ Worry about tomorrow when it has gone, Live for today!

08-23-2005, 05:01 PM	#3
shorty20 Offline Bronze Member Join Date: May 2005 Location: Nebraska Gender: Female Age: 24 Posts: 1,087	what's free form? __________________ ~It's not about waiting for the storm to pass.... it's about learning to dance in the rain~

08-24-2005, 12:54 PM	#4
neva_black_n_white Offline Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: yorkshire Gender: Female Age: 21 Posts: 2,145	Me and my twin are loving it, i think it comes together at the end, you deffinitley round it up well.. love it kell and the lee x __________________ When love cuts blind 20-20 vision. Its better to remain quiet and be thought of as a fool than to speak and remove all doubt!