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08-03-2005, 10:28 AM
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Decomposing
Nothing stops the black shadows
Suffocating mists spreading like wildfire a cancer of minds Through every corridor and into every room Onto every page written by deathly black ink. Flowing from clear, innocent veins pumped from the black heart Til i fall into shadows, shallow graves While insects creep and crawl Festing on my fetid flesh and then...... I am bones.
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08-18-2005, 04:09 PM
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that was absolutely great!
nice work! =D>
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08-19-2005, 01:53 PM
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VERY good.
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08-23-2005, 12:44 PM
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Talented work!
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